starter poetry

rm wonders about excessive rhyme in spellwriting.

I wonder if this phenomenon has the same wellspring as gratuitous rhyming in poetry in general, if we consider spells a special form of poetry, or alternatively, poetry a generalized form of spellcasting?

There's a form I think of as the 'starter poet' structure. Think of a funnel. It begins with long, liberating, casting-off-convention free-verse lines, which acquire rhyme about halfway down an 8-1/2 x 11 page, then gradually contract into a tighter and tighter rhyme scheme until every word rhymes with the next, which is how you know the poem is done.

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There must be a reason it shows up. Maybe it's a protostyle: what you do on your way to getting a grip on form.

I have Spellcraft somewhere, but most magical language I've come across was in the form of ritual song. When I've, you know, Cast Stuff, it was usually more incantatory than rhymed. inlandsea has heard some of the rhymey bits. I don't think anyone else has.

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